Re: PATCH: Clarify check-for-changes with mercurial

[Bart Schaefer <schaefer@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>]

On May 7,  8:49am, Frank Terbeck wrote:
} Subject: PATCH: Clarify check-for-changes with mercurial
}
} +For this style to be evaluated with the tt(hg) backend, the var(get-revision)
} +needs to be set and the var(use-simple) style needs to be unset. The latter
} +is the default; the former is not.

Minor remarks:

"the get-revision needs to be set" is missing a word ("style"?).

Don't use var(xxx) for literal strings.  var(xxx) is for, well,
variables -- not in the shell parameter sense, but in the sense of
something that will be replaced rather than typed literally.  When
yodl'd into "info" format, var(xxx) gets rendered into all-caps XXX
(possibly depending on what info viewer is used).  The convention in
zsh doc is to use `tt(get-revision)' (with or without the single-
quotes depending on context) for literals.

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